Steve and i had a talk about the previous image i made, and these points we agree on. 1. too much white space. 2. the language was good. 3. it was heading in the right direction. 4. they would look better in black and white So to solve the white space problem, i made the scanned images bigger, changed them to black and white.
So then i tried to see what kind of pen works better and were to place the writing. I like writing on the image but so much arrowing the people or objects out and writing who they are etc. so i decided that a little story that my family never talks about, a part of my family history may be better, so that it can also relate to the image.